NaPoWriMo 3 – Elegy for a Holiday
by krstaten
Even in April, here,
we are mourning Christmas–
your Christmas, holiday
hinged on a fire hazard.
The buzz of too many strings
of lights on exposed wires,
dangling along the walls and hallways
of this improvised home.
You built this, with your broken
carpenter hands, and now it, too,
has seen the lights go out. Your hands
left behind these doorless rooms,
all the projects with the wires
exposed, all the haphazard comforts,
colored lights flickering in laughter,
or in spirit, or in perpetual wait.
***
Today’s NaPoWriMo.net prompt was to write an elegy, but make it centered around something specific or unusual about the person or thing it’s about. We lost my father-in-law a couple years ago, and the thing we miss most about him are his Christmases–too many decorations, too many lights, none of them put up entirely safely.
My first poetry recommendation: “Revolutionaries, 1929” by Adam Kirsch
My recommendation of a fellow NaPoWriMo participant’s poem for this prompt: “Elegy for my Father” by Vijaya Sundaram
[…] featured participant is Katie Staten, whose elegy for her father-in-law is full of tender […]
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Beautiful! And thank you for recommending my poem!
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Thanks for reading/commenting! And no problem. =) I want to at least try to give fellow NaPoWriMo participants a little extra publicity where I can, even though this blog doesn’t have a huge following, and I really loved your poem.
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You are very kind. And it was a pleasure to read your work.
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Just saw that you’re the featured poet! Congratulations!
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What a beautiful poem!
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Thank you!
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Love the last 2 lines…lights flickering in laughter, spirit or perpetual wait.
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Thank you very much!
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Sweetly and nicely written.
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Thank you for reading/commenting. =)
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Lively work on a wonderful site. Christmas never ends. Brava. (Thanks for the link to a fellow napowrimo too….)
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Thank you! I’m planning to link a fellow participant every day this month. =)
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[…] NaNoWriMo participant they shared is Katie Staten & her lovely elegy she wrote […]
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[…] Today’s featured poet is Katie Staten, who wrote a well humoured elegy for her father-in-law. https://krstaten.wordpress.com/2017/04/03/napowrimo-3-elegy-for-a-holiday/ […]
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This is a stunning elegy, blending both grief and love in one beautiful poem.
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Thank you so much. ❤
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