The Ghosts of Georgia O’Keeffe and Sigmund Freud Meet in New Mexico
by krstaten
NaPoWriMo 2019 Day 15–Prompt Here
I didn’t come here to talk about painting.
Take a seat. Take a look at the sprawling open–
the rolls of the desert, the way the sky sings
the mountains home to it.
And yes, the flowers too,
the way they thank the rain
in every vibrant language,
but it’s so much more than the flowers.
Haven’t you, too, ever longed for a landscape
and all its promise? Treasures
offered up from the sand like the ocean
tide washing sea shells up–bones
worn thin and smooth and white by the finest grain–
No, I didn’t come here to talk about painting,
though I’d paint if I could.
I’d capture how the faraway horizon steals your words.
If the landscape must be a body,
let it be yours–not in the sense of desire,
but in the sense of what this kind of ocean
will one day make of your bones.
Those lines in your face that boast thoughtful,
only rivets in the sand.
And yes, the flowers too–
if there are flowers, they are your fingerprints,
worlds waiting to be offered to another,
but it’s so much more than flowers.
I didn’t come here to talk about painting.
so much more than flowers.
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Nice.
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Thanks!
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beyond words (K)
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I like a theme I think I detect – the mountains the desert the dominance of nature and we who become like Freud, I think, our thoughtful faces rivets in the sand and what that ocean will do to your bones. Big images (like Georgia’s flowers)
There is a very refreshing and clear quality to your work.
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Thank you so much! O’Keeffe was very inspired by the desert scenery in New Mexico, and a lot of her paintings were done there–and indeed much more than flowers even though that’s what she’s mostly known for now.
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[…] featured participant is Katie Staten, who turned our dramatic prompt for Day Fifteen into an afterlife dialogue between Georgia […]
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So casually deep.
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Thank you!
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Lovely poem
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Thanks!
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Congratulations! I knew you’d be featured today 🙂 This was so good
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Thank you so much!
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[…] featured participant is Katie Staten, who turned our dramatic prompt for Day Fifteen into an afterlife dialogue between Georgia […]
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Truly sublime piece. Thank you for this landscape.
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Thanks very much!
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The repetition of “but it’s so much more than flowers” was chilling. This was beautiful, ponderous, and almost lyrical. Your words are beautiful, love. Thank you for the gift of this experience.
~ Adeline
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Oh wow, thank you so much! What a lovely compliment. ❤
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[…] The prompt did make me think of an older poem of mine that I am still quite proud of, so I would like to share that here, if that’s all right: The Ghosts of Georgia O’Keeffe and Sigmund Freud Meet in New Mexico […]
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