NaPoWriMo 9 – The Fox
by krstaten
A red fox slinks across the lawn, his coat
a matted, fluffy mess, his body lean
and confident, with eyes that seem to gloat–
trots swiftly off the safety of the grass,
a bold, determined face and careless mien,
just as a rusted pick-up comes to pass–
the truck neglects to swerve, although it could,
the fox still never flinches at the scene–
it steels its stare and trots into the wood.
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Boy today was tough. I am not used to writing in strict form! I’m still not sure how I feel about the last stanza. I feel like it’s skipping information for the sake of fitting form.
Today’s prompt at NaPoWriMo.net was to write a poem nine lines long, with a list of nine-line forms to try. I chose the Nocturna.
Today’s first recommendation is “And Then It Was Less Bleak Because We Said So” by Wendy Xu.“ I recommended it last year but it’s one of my all-time favorites that I keep going back to and I wanted to share it again.
And today’s recommendation of a fellow NaPoWriMo participant is this Day 9 poem by grapeling.
Happy NaPoWriMo-ing!
Nice poem
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I think you did a fantastic job! The rhymes are well chosen and the flow is wonderful 🙂
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Thanks! I’m very much not used to writing in rhyme, I do it so rarely, so I’m glad it came across well!
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thanks for the link. I agree with Jade, as well ~
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You’re welcome. And thanks so much for reading and commenting!
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