I’ve decided to start pushing myself to post my little freewrites more often. Here’s one from a couple weeks ago:
If a snake sheds its skin too many times in a row
to get rid of an incessant itch
will it accidentally strip down to muscle?
I have peeled off and slithered out of too many layers.
The blood is showing, veins bulging
in the last layer of pink-red flesh.
I am barely contained inside myself
and like an overripe fruit, I fear
that if I fall too quickly, too hard, I will burst.
Still I try to pull and tug this last skin
to escape the unbearable discomfort
Critique/feedback is, as always, appreciated.